Writing My First Cozy Mystery [Plus A Recipe to Die For!] - Kensington Books Publishing (2024)

By Valerie Wilson Wesley

Writing My First Cozy Mystery [Plus A Recipe to Die For!] - Kensington Books Publishing (1)

A Glimmer of Death is my first cozy, and I loved writing it. I’ve written other books—tough-girl PI mysteries, spooky paranormal romances, books for kids—yet when I sat down to write this one, my mind went as blank as my computer screen. Would I be able to write the kind ofbook so many people love? Could I put aside my gun-toting, PI persona for Odessa Jones, the sweet-tempered character I wanted to create?A good mystery is a good mystery but what was this new world I was entering?To my delight, I fell into it with abandon, for these reasons:

I’m able to offer bits and pieces of myself.I’m certainly not Dessa. She is much younger than I am—more the age of my daughters. I don’t have second sight, although there are times I wish I did.When I smell nutmeg, I think eggnog not murder. Yet in creating Dessa’s world I can draw from my own in ways I’ve never been able to do before.

Take Dessa’s work as a real estate agent. I have a friend who was a realtor for a number of years, and I’ve used her experiences. (Risko Realty, however, is a complete fabrication!). Selling houses is a business dependent on charm, persistence, discipline and luck—and if you don’t have any of those you won’t sell a thing. I’ve also seen—and celebrated—the thrill that comes frommaking a six-figure house sale when the only money you’ve made for months is from rentals.(We celebrated with Moet instead of Cold Duck!)

A Glimmer of Death takes place in an imaginary aging Jersey town called Grovesville that is not completely imagined. It’s close to the place where I live which allows me to drive through its winding streets for quick inspiration. It’s an interesting place, only a few train stops away from a major city and surrounded by other towns of both wealth and poverty. Grovesville has an old-fashioned small town ambience to it, perfect for a cozy, and its influx of folks climbing up and tumbling down the ladder of life offers a wealth of characters to imagine. I can ride through one of its homey neighborhoods and actually “see” Dessa’s cozy little yellow house with its tiny front yard.

Writing My First Cozy Mystery [Plus A Recipe to Die For!] - Kensington Books Publishing (2)

I come from a family of cooks and food is an important part of family life, as it is for Dessa.She and her late husband Darryl owned a catering business and much of her search for peace after his death takes place in her kitchen.One of my daughters is a chef who once ran a catering business. I pitched in to help whenever she had a big order—a sous chef to her executive—while learning the ups and downs of catering. When Dessa needed a cake to charm Lennox Royal, ex-cop and owner of Royal’s Regal Barbecue, my daughter’s 7-up cake, which makes an appearance at all our family celebrations, came to mind—with predictable results. A collard green quiche, another of my favorites, will play a role in an upcoming book.

And then there is Junior, our family cat.Up until now, I never considered him a viable book character, but rechristened as Juniper in A Glimmer of Death, he offers me a chance to share his zany personality as well as virtues and vices with the world—and other cat lovers. Like me, Dessa finds her pet’s dangerous obsession with Temptations concerning and puzzling. Why is he so addicted, she asks herself, and how do I cure him?Sooner or later, I’ll solve that mystery for both of us.

And finally, this year has been one of sorrow, fear and anxiety for me and so many others.Dessa fights her grief and sadness by cherishing the memory of her beloved husband.I hope that reading about Dessa’s struggles will help readers cope with their own.There is a reason why people turn to cozies when life feels too tough to deal with. As a writer, I’ve found solace in escaping to comforting places. Despite hardship, life goes on in the “cozy” world a writer creates, and that can be a good thing.

This is a recipe for Dessa’s—and our family’s—7-up cake as featured in A Glimmer of Death.

Ingredients

  • 1-1/2 cup softened unsalted butter
  • 3 cups granulated sugar
  • 5 large eggs
  • 1 tsp vanilla extract
  • 1 tsp almond extract
  • 3 cups all-purpose flour
  • ¾ cup 7-Up

Instructions

  1. Preheat oven to 325 degrees F.
  2. Grease and lightly flour a 10-inch tub pan or fancy Bundt pan and set aside.
  3. In a large bowl, cream the butter and sugar.
  4. Add the eggs one at a time and beat well after each addition.
  5. Add the flour and the extracts.
  6. Beat well.
  7. Gently fold in the 7-Up ¼ cup at a time.
  8. Pour the batter into the prepared pan.
  9. Bake for 1 ¼ or 1 ½ hour.
  10. You’ll know it’s finished when you poke in a toothpick and it comes out clean.
  11. Transfer the cake to a wire rack and let it cool for 15 minutes.
  12. Unmold on the rack and let it cool completely, then dust it with confectioner’s sugar.

Award-winning author Valerie Wilson Wesley launches a thrilling new mystery series set in New Jersey, featuring a multicultural cast, and starring a caterer-turned-realtor with the gift of second sight…

In the first of a thrilling new series, one woman’s extraordinary psychic gift plunges her already-troubled present into chaos–and puts her future in someone’s deadly sights…

Until now, Odessa Jones’ inherited ability to read emotions and foretell danger has protected her. But second sight didn’t warn her she would soon be a widow–and about to lose her home and the catering business she’s worked so hard to build. The only things keeping Dessa going are her love for baking and her sometimes-mellow cat, Juniper. Unfortunately, putting her life back together means taking a gig at an all-kinds-of-shady real estate firm run by volatile owner Charlie Risko…

Until Charlie is brutally killed–and Dessa’s bullied co-worker is arrested for murder. Dessa can’t be sure who’s guilty. But it doesn’t take a psychic to discover that everyone from Charlie’s much-abused staff to his long-suffering younger wife had multiple reasons to want him dead. And as Dessa follows a trail of lies through blackmail, dead-end clues, and corruption, she needs to see the truth fast–or a killer will bury her deep down with it.

Writing My First Cozy Mystery [Plus A Recipe to Die For!] - Kensington Books Publishing (2024)

FAQs

What is the formula for a cozy mystery? ›

Like any other mystery novel, a cozy mystery features a compelling protagonist who's determined to solve a crime. The plot contains clues, red herrings, and increasingly high stakes, all of which keep the reader actively engaged in solving the puzzle.

How do you write cosy mystery? ›

  1. Common Cozy Mystery Tropes. ...
  2. Researching the Cozy Mystery Genre. ...
  3. Determine Your Setting and Theme. ...
  4. Develop Your Characters. ...
  5. Consider Pace and Plot. ...
  6. Keep It Real (To a Point) ...
  7. Give the Reader What They Need to Solve the Crime. ...
  8. Set Up the Next Book.
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What makes a good cozy mystery? ›

Cozy mysteries tend to be set in cozy places—think a small town, a seaside resort, or another equally inviting place where the reader might like to spend a little time. They are rarely set in large cities. The key here is a place where people tend to know each other, so you can create a village or small community feel.

How many pages should a cozy mystery be? ›

The graph shows such distribution for 100 top-ranking cozy mystery books. You can see that the majority of books fall into the two brackets from 200 to 230 pages. The average value for the so-called Amazon Kindle “estimated print length” is 249 pages (excluding the top/bottom 10% outliers.)

How many chapters should a cozy mystery have? ›

Between 55 and 60k and between 25 and 35 chapters.

How do you write a mystery for beginners? ›

9 Mystery Writing Tips
  1. Read other mysteries often. Great mystery novels are full of writing advice if you pay close attention. ...
  2. Know every detail of the crime. ...
  3. Open with intrigue. ...
  4. Construct convincing characters. ...
  5. Make a list of suspects. ...
  6. Lean into your locations. ...
  7. Let the reader play along. ...
  8. Misdirect your reader.
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How do you write a mystery step by step? ›

There's no right or wrong approach to how to write a mystery, but here's a process you can try.
  1. Come up with an idea. ...
  2. Plan a crime. ...
  3. Develop your sleuth. ...
  4. Decide on a setting. ...
  5. Lay a trail of clues. ...
  6. Come up with your suspects. ...
  7. Invent some red herrings. ...
  8. Plan the investigation.

How do you start a cozy mystery novel? ›

Cozy mysteries are very story-driven, so it's important to set up your character's goals, wants, and motivations early on. Your setting also needs to be clear right from the start. Unlike other genres, the protagonists of cozy mysteries don't always need an internal motivation.

How long should a cozy mystery be? ›

50K-60K words is typical, but if it's shorter, don't add extra words for the sake of it. Novellas are coming into vogue again!

Do cozy mysteries sell? ›

Millions of cozy mysteries sell each year. Cozy writers often get to know their loyal fans. These novels are relatively short, so the authors tend to produce at least one a year, sometimes more.

What was the first cozy mystery? ›

The first full-length cozy mystery appeared in the 1930s, featuring Agatha Christie's Miss Marple.

Are cozy mysteries still popular? ›

Cosy mysteries are preferred, by many, to grisly crime books. Novels by the likes of Agatha Christie, Janice Hallett and Richard Osman remain incredibly popular to wide numbers of people.

What are the tropes for cozy mystery? ›

Examples of these could be a protagonist who is an amateur sleuth, a detective animal, a friendly ghost, cuddly pets, love triangles (but a low spice level), cops who threaten the sleuth for being too nosy, overheard conversations, deaths that look one way but turn out to be something else, and pun-based titles.

What are the elements of a cozy mystery novel? ›

Cozy mysteries generally have very less sex and voilence and profanity. The lead detective/ character is generally an amateur detective also the setting will be a small village/town and a closely connected community.

What are the tropes in cozy mystery? ›

Examples of these could be a protagonist who is an amateur sleuth, a detective animal, a friendly ghost, cuddly pets, love triangles (but a low spice level), cops who threaten the sleuth for being too nosy, overheard conversations, deaths that look one way but turn out to be something else, and pun-based titles.

What is the 4 act mystery structure? ›

The Four-Act Path to Puzzling Your Reader

Act One introduces your reader to your sleuth and the mystery. Act Two uncovers the victim's world. Act Three includes conflicts and obstacles to discovering the villain. Act Four eliminates other suspects and ends with the revelation of the villain.

What is the format of a mystery novel? ›

To keep structure simple, think of your mystery novel as having four parts. Within each part style, voice, psychological depth, action, dialogue, and setting are up to your discernment. But, to satisfy the mystery reader's desire for a puzzle, following this four-part structure will help you meet reader expectations.

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